Tantare (another Fib)

My stab at a syllable-counting Fib:

Tan!
Tan!
Tanta!
Tantare...
Ni·ave qillo...
Ai, malda ne nímo ave!

This is all from the Early Quenya Grammar except for ?av- which is what I make of QL:33 avin 'he departs', p.t. ambe.

Translation:

'Tap!
Tap!
Taptap!
A dance...
I'm getting out of here...
Oh, it's better that I get out!'

Submitted by Aran on Sun, 07/01/2012 - 17:53

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That's a fine one, indeed. I have to give it a try in syllables as well.

07/04/2012 - 18:22

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